Feedback

Today we did another student feedback session in lesson. Our video is much closer to being finished now so this feedback we got will help us to sort out any problems and help us to reach a final music video.

Good points:

• Good idea,
• Funny and interesting
• Casting right - well acted
• Clear narrative

Bad points:

• Need more clarity on the rabbit hole bit.
• In bathroom  scene he has jacket on going in but then doesn't have it on when out, isn't clear he is in shorts
• Impact points at the start need to be edited a bit more to grab attention of the audience straight away, a lot better towards end